tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3547067420689722925.post7332122350079260731..comments2023-08-13T11:58:31.588-04:00Comments on Ghulf Genes: April's BackADhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06408980212433714362noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3547067420689722925.post-24336755625692360952011-04-01T17:38:06.120-04:002011-04-01T17:38:06.120-04:00I, too, find such internal rhymes most pleasing, e...I, too, find such internal rhymes most pleasing, especially when reading the poem out loud to myself, or finding another poet echoing same. Makes it doubly so.Brigittehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14002034412151764344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3547067420689722925.post-43564829779177283312011-04-01T13:40:33.331-04:002011-04-01T13:40:33.331-04:00I very much like the use of internal rhyme-echoes ...I very much like the use of internal rhyme-echoes here -- back/lack, Spring/clings, under/thunder, overcast/vast, rain/gain, etc. It makes the poem crackle and rumble a bit.Brandonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06698839146562734910noreply@blogger.com